Critisism on this short excerpt from my story? Please and thank you?

It's good! the only things are that the verb "hiss" implies something more hostile, so that's a little confusing at first, and Kia's exclamation of "Stop this! You're just the shell of a person and it's killing me." is a bit sudden. Let her agitation show a little first and build.

I have a few questions about miscarriage, will someone help please?

How easy is it to do something physical to cause a miscarriage? I'm 11 weeks and 3 days pregnant with my husband and i's first child we planned the babyand february and got a positive test basically immediately, I was a very active person before the pregnancy like playing with dogs, I did work construction, playing with kids, I've calmed down a lot since I found out I was pregnant but every now and then I do something I feel like I shouldn't do then it worries me, like- plopping down on the couch to hard, kneeling down on the floor to fast to play with a kitten, its minor (hopefully) stuff like that-that worries me, I apologize if I sound like a worry bug and my questions don't make sense but id really like to know if its easy stuff like that for example that could cause a miscarriage? Can someone please help me?

Does anyone else think breast feeding in public is disgusting?

This is a joke, right? I do not find the breastfeeding of babies in public disgusting. Why would I? A mom breastfeeding isn't showing nipple and not a lot of breast tissue. You actually see more breast tissue on the front of Cosmo and Vogue magazines. I'd much rather see a mom breastfeeding at the pool or beach than to see some of the peak-a-boo nipples, camel toes and speedo bulges - shudder!

What children's animation movie is this?

It's about these cells that live inside someone.., I remember seeing it when I was younger on Cartoon Network. I remember they were in the stomach and food was plopping down but it was like the mall for them.

White Pulsing Orb Above My Bed?

I am a teenager and I have been living a normal, good life - and still am. There is just one thing that is concerning me. I have lately been seeing this pretty small, flashing (a calm, usually steady) orb above my bed, and stays there until I turn on the light, or my TV. My grandma recently passed away, and I'm not sure weather this have something to do with it or not, but if that helps any. Has anyone else been going through this, and what is it?

What does a wide orb indicate that a narrow one wouldn't (aspects)?

I'm not 100% sure i know exactly what you're asking, but if i'm understanding you correctly, the wider the orb is between 2 objects in aspect, the less powerful the aspect, and therefore a less pronounced effect on the individual.

30 weeks and my two year old jumped on my stomach?

i was laying on the couch and she was standing on the couch beside me and plopped down hard on my stomach, the baby is still moving but ive been having cramping off and on no bleeding or change in discharge though am i being paranoid or should i go in to the doctor